Kulideb keeps Noulminur locked in her dark dungeon, where he is regularily tortured - or shall we say "teased" - by cute... little... giggling... halflings... and pixies... hmm. Priestly duties can wait - this incarceration is FUN! :
Well, that's my main, favored, most self-based char, so i'm gonna be a picky bastard: You gave him a stubble, and hair on his chest, both of which he is unable to have by birth {No hair grows on him anywhere except the head - inherited from the mother's side}.
I was gonna say his facial expression is somewha off, but on a second look... sure, it's not his "regular facade", but he is obviously trying to either negotiate his way out of captivity, or convert someone {Either a captor or a co-inmate}, and during such excercises of his social skills, his expression is likely to leave ocasioanlly the usual mold of "40% determination / 30% mischievousness / 30% arrogance", and the one he has on here is a natural one... plus i think i can see his everpresent gleam behind this open-looking expression. So in short, i love it.
I spoke so much of the expression, but not of the face itself, on which i have only one comment: Unlike his "celebrity lookalike", Noulminur put some ranks in JUST the right skills, and has experience in more than just assasination, so the excuse used in the movie would not work. Did someone just rename Ihrey to Mathilda? >_> ... ^_^
His hands are right on spot, i love it! So is his neck, though maybe it could use being more... wiering.
You said on the email that you couldn't get the hair right, but i actually think the hair is great. Can'd expect a dude locked in the dungeon to have his hairstyle in perfect repair, right? ;D
I'm totally loving this! :=*
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Well, that's my main, favored, most self-based char, so i'm gonna be a picky bastard: You gave him a stubble, and hair on his chest, both of which he is unable to have by birth {No hair grows on him anywhere except the head - inherited from the mother's side}.
I was gonna say his facial expression is somewha off, but on a second look... sure, it's not his "regular facade", but he is obviously trying to either negotiate his way out of captivity, or convert someone {Either a captor or a co-inmate}, and during such excercises of his social skills, his expression is likely to leave ocasioanlly the usual mold of "40% determination / 30% mischievousness / 30% arrogance", and the one he has on here is a natural one... plus i think i can see his everpresent gleam behind this open-looking expression. So in short, i love it.
I spoke so much of the expression, but not of the face itself, on which i have only one comment: Unlike his "celebrity lookalike", Noulminur put some ranks in JUST the right skills, and has experience in more than just assasination, so the excuse used in the movie would not work. Did someone just rename Ihrey to Mathilda? >_> ... ^_^
His hands are right on spot, i love it! So is his neck, though maybe it could use being more... wiering.
You said on the email that you couldn't get the hair right, but i actually think the hair is great. Can'd expect a dude locked in the dungeon to have his hairstyle in perfect repair, right? ;D
I'm totally loving this! :=*
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